Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,838 Points (15 th April 1967 / RANCHI,)

‘o' My Almighty - Poem by Aftab Alam

Is it tears of the night?
Or pearls of the day!
Is it woes of the star?
Or dancing feathers gay!
Is it Lord's holy earth?
Or Devils dropping bay!
Is it freedom palsied gift?
Or trapping rosaries say!
I am puzzled with thy puzzles,
Gone mad with the 'dyeing day',
Either snatch out my freedom:
Or make me a slave to pay.
I prithee- ‘O' My Almighty!
Listen carefully -what I say..

Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual

Comments about ‘o' My Almighty by Aftab Alam

  • Liza Sudina (10/13/2015 12:03:00 PM)

    Almighty! - He doesn't only listens to you - He already KNOWS and knew what you wanted to say and just what you thought! He is always with you, inside you, in and out! and loves you so much! nice poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Daniel Erdner (9/24/2014 2:05:00 PM)

    Your words are very thought provoking, thanks for your efforts. I feel a little deeper after having read some of your works. Also, thanks for your comment on my recent attempt. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (9/20/2014 1:23:00 PM)

    A petition and prayer to the Almighty! Hopes of better days
    to come. Very heartfelt write.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (9/16/2014 10:37:00 AM)

    Listen carefully, what i say, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/29/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    this world keeps us wondering between good and evil good write Aftab (Report) Reply

  • Ozark Mountain Homegrown (8/27/2013 8:14:00 PM)

    This is very thought provoking and well written..blind faith is enough for some...but for others not enough...some want better understanding...I liked this very much (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (8/24/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    Oh wow sir poet one of yor best poem in fabulous rhymin n content in supplication. Dis is d one u wantd me to read? (Report) Reply

  • Shaila Touchton (4/29/2013 4:26:00 AM)

    Very beautiful, Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/16/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    A very nice piece of work. As a matter of fact, life is always weighed on both sides. Thanks for sharing this peom with us.

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  • Ruby Mostazir (4/11/2013 10:32:00 AM)

    dis is a brilliant be honest it tooks minutes to understand da concept!
    I am puzzled with thy puzzle,
    Gone mad with the dying day, ...... excellent!
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  • David Wood (4/10/2013 3:45:00 PM)

    A very thought provoking poem. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    It is a poem easy to remember all words are starry (Report) Reply

  • (3/29/2013 8:16:00 AM)

    A high level of poetic wonderment! (Report) Reply

  • (3/28/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    I enjoy reading this immensely; it deserves a perfect ten. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (3/18/2013 11:18:00 AM)

    Listen carefully what I say. very good write. I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, January 16, 2015

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