Crocodile Grin Poem by karen sinclair

Crocodile Grin

Rating: 5.0


Manitou slides
Doppelgänger silhouette
Ballet prides
Twisted contorted pirouette
Pierrot dolls glare twingingly
Stare wistfully from shaded mottled space
Ventriloquist disgusting tricks
From two deceitful
Face
The magicians hook
Stare garishly
Whilst he wilfully reels in
Audience of ooh faced crowds
Doused in doubt, at just whats
Happening
A rocking horse
It squeaks the boards
With no child on its
Back
And forth to kiddie Hell
Wooden teeth, a glare, a smile, a crack
Puppets is as puppets does
Whilst someone cuts the string
A slumped doll, hair shorn
Skipping rope to swing

The troll which lay beneath the bed
Fumbling hands to grab small feet
Spiders who crawl purposely
To join beneath the sheets
But worst of all, most worst of all, the dreaded curtain smiles
Which changed within a gentle breeze to something thats
Most vile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

Interesting write, captivating.

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Hamid Negah 18 August 2012

Skillfully written, very Interesting...i loved it.

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Godfrey Morris 18 August 2012

This is a clever write

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Danny Draper 18 August 2012

Creepy in a slow skin crawling verse that Stephen King would love to have written.

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Smoky Hoss 13 January 2015

This is an amazing dream! ... or 'twas it a nightmare?

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Owain Glyn 16 March 2013

A teasing piece of horror that is amusing, an extraordinary piece of writing.

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Knight Fizzstorm 24 August 2012

Immaculately perceived and stunningly delivered. A captivating poem. I commend you.

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Ruth Walters 20 August 2012

spooky! Brilliantly written though

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Kelly Seale 20 August 2012

Very clever! Very Good Write Karen! I enjoyed your style! -Kelly.

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