Crossing The Line! ! ! Poem by Compton Wright

Crossing The Line! ! !

Rating: 3.8


Why can we cross the line my young best friend
As you are my close friend which is rare
To come by these days of betrayal and lust
But yet...a sudden hidden feeling of passion
To kiss your luscious lips and feel your soft skin
You know my likes and dislikes of a woman
As you know my dark past and skeletons but
Yet…you accepted it with ease and absolute trust

You understand me more any other woman I knew
You hang out with me like you need me to know yourself
But you still think it won’t work between us both and stay friends
Where the risk between the bonding line between friend and lover
I know you like the back of my hand and fingers so why not trust me
You know my intentions are completely good and heart warming
You told me that the girl that sweep me off my feet will be lucky to have me
But what happen when the planets align and the stars connect our names
together

Like we were met for each other to become our heart’s desire of a true love
Crossing the line is nothing but mental thought not a physical negative reaction
You said you are tired of men breaking your heart…will I’m here to repair it
You know my experiences of broken heart moments that make another alter ego
As you see the invisible tears coming down my face hidden with a blinded smile
You know it in your heart that it begs me to lean inside your heart and sing it a melody

Our bodies feel such strong vibes all around the room we stand as I pop the question
The line of friendship and love relationship is infinite to the highest point of life
Yes? No? Maybe? My Heart beats harder as it tries to burst out my chest by the suspense
We stare within ourselves questioning to have this line cut loose or stay attach like gold

Damn so much confusion in the mix of feelings that floats in our minds and spirits
Like the whispers in the winds or the ghosts of lost loves and/or lovers which is shady to us all
Trust me like you trust within yourself to choose the right choice for true eternal love

As the door of everlasting happiness and salvation start here with one answer
Please say the word that will spread our love to worldwide and beyond human belief
Of what they or we believe of true love meaning for it means who knows if…
We don’t give it a try upon the heavens as they smiling opening their bare clouds
With shinning light and purity... you ran, hide, and pushed away love to avoid…

Heart breaking moments or never feel love again at all but yet here I am…
I’m here to please you and apply pleasure upon your weaken heart of yours
So say the word that I crave to hear like a playing of a harp in my mind
The words that will bring dreams for the perfect man come true

These words will break the line yes but only to build a stronger bond
As I love you and you love me from the bottom of our hearts please say
Yes I will walk away from the line of friendship, safety, steady moving
Yes I will walk into your heart of complete love, compassion and be your lover
As I would be honor to be yours until now and forever known as your desire

Line broke loose and the struggles of love stops as I gotten my wish at last
The Line between best friend and sweet lover has been erased
As only to create the era of a new beginning of true love and passion
For the two profound lovers to find and discover their love and themselves
In the complete cycle of what I like to call…Forever Love Begins

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 24 January 2009

i love the emotion of this poem its very strong and it's delightful 10+++++

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Raven Bishop 24 January 2009

This fully describes your love in the astounding!

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I believe we have all been here one point in life.. Its hard when one dosen't see the other only as a great friend. I hope you gave her this poem sometimes we are blinded with love by a great friend.. Great piece I believe this is one of you're best of work.. Krista

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 January 2009

Good write Compton. Forever love is already here, there, everywhere. You just have discovered it from a certain point on the line. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Tissa Calvert 26 January 2009

this is really good but try putting it into poem stanza

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Aijaz Asif 25 January 2009

quite long but a very beautiful write indeed, thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif

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<font color =fusha>Amy 25 January 2009

this is a fantastic poem, you can really picture this and imagine how much effort has gone into it, i applaud your oustanding work and hope she realises how lucky she is

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