! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *** Cry Of Innocence ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *** Cry Of Innocence ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 3.8


sparkling dew cries over blade of grass
redeeming slowly by rays golden
mystery shrouds over green of garden
as dawn remembers art of last night

query riffles by nature of resonance
precision happens to happen by bliss
sweetness refluxes by newness of world
soul awes by eclectic cry of innocence

joy resounds mingling into spumes in void
quest lays back into eternity by askance
is there love lost to reason of murky ravine?
as beauty of grace reels up by dreams onshore

soul knows truth of trust by reason implicit
greenness smooches by eyes of grin surmised
heart yet needs warmth of love by craving
moment when chilled by snow in indulgence

yet moment makes history in ages and eons
embracing breaths of love and hatred entwined
into the furrows of days and night intemperate
still we smacks of love resolute in adherence

gleans of love streams in as yet not hurt! !
enlighten soul by divine glory of love sanguine
as quest dies then there by the rain sizzling
like bubbles of queries mingling into obscurity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Swimming in the sea of sadness yet soaring in the sky of significance. Well done my friend.

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deep, wise and beautiful...enjoying always your unique style sparkling dew cries over blade of grass redeeming slowly by rays golden mystery shrouds over green of garden as dawn remembers art of last night query riffles by nature of resonance precision happens to happen by bliss sweetness refluxes by newness of world soul awes by eclectic cry of innocence joy resounds mingling into spumes in void quest lays back into eternity by askance is there love lost to reason of murky ravine? as beauty of grace reels up by dreams onshore soul knows truth of trust by reason implicit greenness smooches by eyes of grin surmised heart yet needs warmth of love by craving moment when chilled by snow in indulgence

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Marcella D 16 October 2009

don't cry anymore, this is a sad poem

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Roy Martinez 16 October 2009

good job...I love it 10

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Nolan Trenton 14 October 2009

a masterpiece..well expressed 10

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Katherine Shaw 06 August 2010

Great poem, love the use of words, i have some more poetry posted, please read when you have time, thanks

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loNeLY AnGel 25 May 2010

VERy well written this is such a beautiful poem couldn't help of writting a comment when i read this.. excellent us of words *.*

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Sahar Sahar 14 February 2010

i completely enjoyed this poem decisional in between natural beauties and nature related changes......i hope you will go on with

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Moonbee Canady 04 November 2009

I Loved This Poem... The Beauty of the Words brings Sublime Imagery... I like the way you speak it, Tell its own Story - Nature, Time, Love, etc.... MoonBee

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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