Cupid Poem by Viola Grey


Rating: 4.7

Savage little naked fool
with puny weapons of love
fly yourself to another heart
before I snap your wings.

Point poison arrows at me again
and feel the wrath I reap
I'm wounded...hurt...yet still beating...
so quit aiming at my chest.


Tai Chi Italy 06 July 2008

lol you tell him good and proper viola, there is no one more dangerous than a wounded lover....smiling at you, Tai

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Saint Cynosure 07 July 2008

Good work here Viola... Looks as if everyone agrees,10! ! ! ! !

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Dawn Slanker 08 July 2008

That Cupid...he's really a demon in disguise. Great poem :)

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Kyle Shield Laster 09 July 2008

i love it. a definite 10! ! keep writing...i like this aggressiveness.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 July 2008

very intersting piece of work I loved it my 10

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*Trusting You* 30 November 2008

Point poison arrows at me again and feel the wrath I reap and I will be right there with her... Ya go gettem Viola! ! ! lol. this made me smile. very good job. Becca

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

A small and wonderful poem, love it.10++

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Existential Despair 03 August 2008

Simply the greatest poem i've on this site so far...i need not say more

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Who Iam 31 July 2008

The sting of his arrow that never leaves; either bringing joy or sadly sorrow! Your advice to Cupid is very well put, although I feel you are a romantic at heart and when you are ready it too will return!

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Tom Balch 17 July 2008

he will get you again, thats when you kick the...... out of him.regards Tom 10/10

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