Daddy Don'T Leave! Poem by Crazy Vampire

Daddy Don'T Leave!

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my father left my brothers mom
and yet he acts like nothing happened he acts calm
he tried to leave my family and me
that was not a pleasent scene for a young girl to see

i cried that day because i was losing him
it was hard to remember his face, the lights were dim
while he packed his clothes i tried to change his mind
to make him remember the happy times, put this behind

but he didnt listen and he walked out
since that day, a father i have been without
i am angry, i refuse to forgive
i shall never talk to him while i live!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aimee Lee 25 March 2010

aww. that was really good, but really sad..-_-

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Loss, separation, the accompanying pangs!

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Robin Machorro 27 July 2010

i love the emotion in this! its so powerful i enjoy reading your poems

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D.J. Ray 14 April 2010

i understand where you come from with that, my dad left before i was born and i bet millions of kids across the world could say the same

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Iron Panda 23™ 26 March 2010

soo well expressed! ! thats soooo not kool what he did! ! D: <

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Nevaeh 101 25 March 2010

AWW......so cute i think its reallly good.

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Crazy Vampire

Hemet, California
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