*** Daily Prayer *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

*** Daily Prayer ***

Rating: 5.0





oh Divine!

Please listen the prayer of little fool
Cant you make the summer bit cool

Oh divine!

Cant you make winters little warm
and bid rains to fall only in farm

Oh Divine!

Cant you give us the wings to fly
And fix back of head with pair of eyes

Oh Divine!

Cant you give three Sundays per week
and free bodyguards to humble and meek

Oh Divine!

Cant you give us free food and home
So there is no work save to roam

Oh Divine!

Cant you give us two brains
So we dont have these fancies vain

ANJALI SINHA
17-12-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Russel Choudhury 13 January 2009

What a charming poem, keep it up.

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Luis Alvarado 17 January 2009

Food for thought. Your imagination is limitless! ! Pleasure to read. Thanks.

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Eddie Roa 20 January 2009

a prayer that sounds so innocent and childlike. The smooth flowing and unpretentious verse make for enjoyable reading.

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Mahfooz Ali 22 January 2009

Sure ur prayer will be answered by the almighty......... keep it up......... 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2009

Funny..I'm reminded of a tamil film song which asks for two hearts or minds...one to laugh and one to cry...nice write10

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Simple in its profundity and profound in its simplicity. Well done my freind! 10+++

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Daniel Harding 21 January 2010

I too love writing poems.you have so many, which ones would like for me to read? I want to add so many of mine to this site, but I am to slow at typing. Thank you for your comment on my poem (OLD GLORY) I have revised it.

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Afzal Shauq 31 May 2009

WHAT A PRETTY SWEET AND GREAT POEM IS THIS ONE...MELODIOUS, PERFECTLY DONE. RICH IDEA AND POETIC FLOW...ALL THESE ARE THE BEAUTIES OF YOUR THIS POEM..I REALLY LIKED IT VERY MUCH SPECIALLY THIS STANZA, , , , Oh Divine! Cant you give us two brains So we dont have these fancies vain

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

Beautiful idea of two brains! A creative perceptive thought. 10+++

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Mahfooz Ali 25 May 2009

Gud morning! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Morning prayers will always be answeered......... surprised na......... seeing me dis tym.......... ye............hehehe..........hehehe...........

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