those tiny shiny stars up there
three of them in a triangle sit there
every night i see them from here
wonder what would be their chat up there
from such distance am not able to hear
as a viewer
the sight of it gives me immense peace and pleasure
though i do want to hear
what would be their lovely chat up there......
like lovely dressed tiny girls there
these three seem to me from here
may be they feel shy with the lovely dresses they wear
a minute or two in shyness would be fair
keeping mum a night long for a girl child is very rare
DAINTY DRESSED DARLINGS
the melody of their sweet chat up there
i really miss hearing from here
I can sense your true emotion in this poem, Sam! very imaginative yet, somehow reflects anyone's longing for 'Dainty Darlings, ' which i also believe based on your inner passion. Very well-written, my friend. :)
A poem full of wonderful imagery, are the dainty darlings your daughters maybe who are not with you? 10 Lynda xx
Dear Samanyan, Nice little imaginative poem with lyrical rhyming. Liked it Rated high Rajkumar
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Great imagination…and noetic chat… and poets are licensed for that…imagination is in every cells of poet … impossible or absurd it is… TEN Ms. Nivedita UK
Oh how l wish to hear there chat...they are called summer triangle if am not mistaken. You gave me this child like feeling of wanting to stand out like we use to as children and stare at the sky. Just maybe I will also hear what they chat about...beautifully penned...10++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
great flow of words...and every time i look up at the stars...i will remember this poem...regards