# # Dainty Darlings Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # Dainty Darlings

Rating: 4.5


those tiny shiny stars up there
three of them in a triangle sit there
every night i see them from here
wonder what would be their chat up there

from such distance am not able to hear
as a viewer
the sight of it gives me immense peace and pleasure
though i do want to hear
what would be their lovely chat up there......

like lovely dressed tiny girls there
these three seem to me from here
may be they feel shy with the lovely dresses they wear
a minute or two in shyness would be fair
keeping mum a night long for a girl child is very rare

DAINTY DRESSED DARLINGS

the melody of their sweet chat up there
i really miss hearing from here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 25 October 2009

great flow of words...and every time i look up at the stars...i will remember this poem...regards

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Raj Arumugam 23 October 2009

moving, inspiring lines, Samanyan

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Smiley Hooker 23 October 2009

I can sense your true emotion in this poem, Sam! very imaginative yet, somehow reflects anyone's longing for 'Dainty Darlings, ' which i also believe based on your inner passion. Very well-written, my friend. :)

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Lynda Robson 21 October 2009

A poem full of wonderful imagery, are the dainty darlings your daughters maybe who are not with you? 10 Lynda xx

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 20 October 2009

Dear Samanyan, Nice little imaginative poem with lyrical rhyming. Liked it Rated high Rajkumar

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Congratulations. This poem ranks @#41 in the list of best poems of members today

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 December 2009

Great imagination…and noetic chat… and poets are licensed for that…imagination is in every cells of poet … impossible or absurd it is… TEN Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mangla Shanker 01 November 2009

a very sweet and thoughtfull poem..... :)

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Emu Getachew 28 October 2009

Oh how l wish to hear there chat...they are called summer triangle if am not mistaken. You gave me this child like feeling of wanting to stand out like we use to as children and stare at the sky. Just maybe I will also hear what they chat about...beautifully penned...10++++

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Joseph Poewhit 26 October 2009

Stars hold many wonders

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