Damaged Poem by Aurora Wells

Damaged

Rating: 5.0


whispers and visions
aching, twisting, burning,
my memories of hate as I watch you
your lies, secrets

painful, traumatic, deadly
I had all I could because of you
now I am... thanks to me
and all you've done - I give back to you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Degnan 26 March 2007

Awesome use of your passion...pithy, powerful. Good work!

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Keith Wells 07 January 2007

Strong words... Great work keep it up.... Keep letting your word flow.... It will help you find peace..... Love ya keith

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Joshua Fegley 22 December 2006

Powerful Aurora..........write more.........take care.

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Roger Bowman 17 December 2006

Wow.I like the ending.Cool poemo Take good care Roger

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Lee Degnan 16 December 2006

Gee sis, I wonder who this was for? ? lol Welcome to Poemhunter... I'm glad to see you here.... keep it up, want more! Lee

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