Crimson Love

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Dance With Me - Poem by Crimson Love

Roll your hips my way,
Feel the music,
Let the rythme take you away,
Move your body into mine,
Sway your hips side to side,
roll your body onto mine,

Move your body,
Lets entwine,
Feel the music,
Feel my body,
Dance together,
forever partners,

music conversing with thoughts in my head,
feeling high, the music has given us wings,
Lets sway to the music Let the rythme fly us away,
Bodies grinding,
Bumping on the floor,
Sweating, passions, we both need more,

take my hand,
I'll follow you,
Take me where you want me,
Now feel me where you please,
Dancing slower,
lust sets in,

Music swaying our bodies,
Falling into eachother,
Slip a little closer, feel my breath,
Look into my eyes,
The rythme has left.


Comments about Dance With Me by Crimson Love

  • Jacqui BroadJacqui Broad (10/11/2011 2:49:00 AM)

    The sweetness of love... Doing the act, one don't need breaks. The words flow gently and I can hear hearts thumping with the rhythm of love... Lovely poetry to read when you're in the mood... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Luis Estable (10/5/2011 5:12:00 PM)

    The only thing I wish here is if you had taken this into stanzas to give the poem little breaks. It would have read, I think much better. As it is now it just goes on for line after line with not breaks in between, but even thought I wish this this is not a bad try.

    Keep improving your craft.

    The best to you now!
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  • Stefanie Fontker (10/5/2011 3:37:00 PM)

    Maybe if you ask nicely. Haha, nice poetry, my friend. You've done a beautiful job. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 5, 2011


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