Crimson Love

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Whisper's Of The Heart

Poem by Crimson Love

When Love I bestow, it shall be upon thee,
My love like my life are yours, can't you see?
Your love more valuable than anything to me,
Your beautiful smile,
Your heart warming touch,
Your simple words, I love so much.

You can say nothing, and I can still hear you,
your heart whispering, telling me of its love,
It tells me its mine, forever and always,
carressing such beauty, I should count myself lucky,
Beauty can decieve but within you no lies I see.

Beauty unsurpassed, that is you,
so sweet, my sweet tooth cannot resist,
Your love so divine, This calls for intervention,
I'm becoming weaker, I've let you in,
You shall remain in my heart,
To this day.... forever.....
Even upon entering death,
our love shall remain.

Comments about Whisper's Of The Heart by Crimson Love

  • Godfrey MorrisGodfrey Morris (5/22/2015 6:13:00 PM)

    A very lovely write by an awesome poet; especially one so young.(Report)Reply

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  • No Ones Bidness (10/11/2011 5:41:00 AM)

    Doesn't match the title but a really nice read show the love you hold in your heart(Report)Reply

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  • Sumanta RoySumanta Roy (10/11/2011 1:40:00 AM)

    Really its true love you explain here.(Report)Reply

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  • Lenore Lee (10/10/2011 10:56:00 PM)

    Gorgeous and true. How true love touches one's soul! How one's heart will always crave the other's. Love cannot exist without trust and trust cannot exist without love. It is so easy to let a person in if you trust and understand them, that is what this poem says to me.(Report)Reply

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  • Ace Of Black HeartsAce Of Black Hearts (10/10/2011 4:28:00 PM)

    Even upon death those we care about the most are always remembered.
    Even in the most harsh December the heart can only be temporarily frozen.
    It will be thawed and reawakened.
    Never will we settle for being forsaken.
    Such elevation as the temperature rises
    Love becomes of constant high.
    Always content till the very end.

    Great Poem Crimson, As Always Your Love Inspires.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 11, 2011