abhilasha bhatt


Dard... - Poem by abhilasha bhatt

Ye tanhai jo faaili hai door tak
Mere ujde hue nakshon ka sabab hai ek
Ye teeke teer se bhede shabdon ka guldasta hai
Jinki kamaan geron k Nhi apnon k hathon main hi thi
Tiraskar shor se
Taanakasi purzor se
Jane Kbtk kahan tak ye silsila chalega...

Topic(s) of this poem: pain


Comments about Dard... by abhilasha bhatt

  • (3/25/2018 3:36:00 PM)

    Your poem in English translation here -

    https: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/pain-957/
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  • Savita Tyagi (1/19/2018 9:04:00 PM)

    बहुत सुन्दर और क़ाबिले तारीफ़ ग़ज़ल है। Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Mithilesh Yadav (11/24/2016 1:01:00 PM)

    janey kab tk ye silsila chalega..... grrtttt............... thanx for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Souren Mondal (2/16/2016 9:37:00 PM)

    A very impressive write Abhilasha.. Wonderful - :) (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (2/14/2016 2:38:00 AM)

    Impressive and touching, it's pain when felt inspires to write such amazing lines. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/31/2016 1:40:00 AM)

    The life itself is a pain with sorrow and good poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/10/2016 6:52:00 AM)

    True illustration of pain. Thanks a lot for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (1/5/2016 2:37:00 AM)

    kabtak kahantak ye silsila chalega.. wonderful.. (Report)Reply

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  • Rishi Thakkar (1/4/2016 12:32:00 AM)

    Kuch atoot Saa sambandh hai dard aur zindigi ka.. Jaise mano ek kavi se kalam syahi ka.. Khushiya to khudgarz hoti hai sabse baat sakte hai Dard khaas aur dil k kareeb jo ho mehsus kar sakta hai.. (Report)Reply

    Abhilasha Bhatt(1/4/2016 1:42:00 AM)

    Wo Jo baanta tha hamne sabse wo khushi thi....wo jo khudmain smaaye rakha wo dard tha.. :)

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  • Rajnish Manga (12/31/2015 10:27:00 AM)

    दर्द और तन्हाई का एक लंबा सिलसिला जो दूर तक फैला रहा, हमारी दुआ है कि आज इसी जगह थम जाये. कल से शुरू होने वाला नया साल नई उम्मीदों, नए ख्व़ाब और नई खुशियों के दिलकश सिलसिले ले कर आये. धन्यवाद. (Report)Reply

    Abhilasha Bhatt(12/31/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    Happy new year sir... :)

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/31/2015 10:23:00 AM)

    Pain is wisely narrated in this poem. Very amazing sharing done definitely.10 (Report)Reply

    Abhilasha Bhatt(12/31/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    Thank you sir...nd a very happy new year :)

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 31, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 10, 2016


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