Dark Mountains Poem by Sandra Fowler

Dark Mountains

Rating: 5.0


For I have seen dark mountains in the sky,
More Himalayan to the naked eye,
Than any reason for our where or why.

Hands clasp to lift a measure of that height.
The gesture is as fragile as a kite
Against the massive, polarizing night.

And yet, my friend, I am content to be
A little part of that entirety.
All space my hands can hold belongs to me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 24 April 2009

Wonderful use of imagery Sandra, a really outstanding poem. Best wishes, Andrew

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Sonya Florentino 04 April 2009

This is beautiful Sandra… we might not know what our place or role is in this universe but the fact that we’re here is something we shouldn’t take for granted…..

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Melvina Germain 13 May 2008

Wonderful Sandra, very powerful indeed, it captures humanity to a T. We are tiny little beings compared to this massive universe. Profound Sandra, love it. Melvina

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Bill Grace 02 October 2007

Very powerful. Bill Grace

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Mary Naylor 19 September 2007

An impressive and beautiful poem! I especially love the second stanza. It makes one feel the enormity of the night and the mountain and our yearning to be a part of it all!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 October 2022

Sandra, it's a fantastic poem. Your poetry flows like a murmuring river. Top score! !

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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 September 2009

You have everything in your hands.To hold darkness is can be gratifying.

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Sue Ann Simar 23 May 2009

You can't live in West Virginia and not gravitate towards 'Dark Mountains'

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 21 May 2009

Only in spirit and awe can we face up to greatness and adore.Your poem echo's thoughts I had during climb's when the mind alsoventures into the realm above. Wonderful and spectacular

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nomad omnia 29 April 2009

Sandra, everything I read of yours, seems to strike a longing chord. Dark mountains are but a memory, 'though they will always be the flag of freedom that calls me home. Take care, and stay inspired! :) N

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Sandra Fowler

Sandra Fowler

W. Columbia, WV, USA
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