Darling, I Love You Poem by Aftab Alam

Darling, I Love You

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I know, you wrote my name on sand
Wind that bowed and serge that kissed
Lovers walked over it hand in hand
Thought, It‘ll be washed out, it missed

Thank for your kind support and love
In fact you wrote on your heart and mind
'Darling, I love you' made me a lovely Dove
I am happy, why to complain? Haven't I refined?

What life if no pain, one must know to live
Blissfully, I've dream-realm, you must know
My breath is for all, it is a pleasure hive
Drips love-honey; it's not ugly tears to show

I know, you wrote my name on high stone
We both played quite long without any pine
And you well tried to rub it off and gone
Your soul is with me and with you is mine;

There are many ways to live, I chose one
I loved, feared Lord, and never made fun

Thursday, September 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 10 October 2013

beautiful poem. well written

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Ruby Mostazir 29 September 2013

wow!

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Sallam Yassin 28 September 2013

the love is always unsure the love is fair /unfair the love is firm/ infirm but like/ love is always there

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Pardaz Sheikh 27 September 2013

I know, you wrote my name on sand Wind that bowed and serge that kissed Lovers walked over it hand in hand Thought, It‘ll washed out, you missed well written lines

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Neela Nath Das 26 September 2013

Very soothing poem.Loved the confessional style.In a word- - - superb!

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