Dark brown dry fruit delicacy and delicious
Almond pitted and highly nutricious
Tasty Arabian chocolate hued treat
Eastern 'n' Persian sweetmeat
Soft insides, dessert of the desert, so sweet!
Islam encourages marital spouses and doesn't allow premarital fickle sweetheart dates
Thus the only dates allowed are the edible ones you see on rozedar's plates.
RAMAZAN MUBARAK GREETINGS
break fast with my acrostic
First, I thank you for commenting on my poem and giving me feedback, I love how you use the Ramadan theme in your poem and I wish you a Ramadan karim, keep up the good work.
wow! great piece of work simply superb and your style of co-relating dates is a great meaning. Hope holy ramadan is date free not dates free in the plate of rozedaars
nice straight forward lines...stating a religious dictum drawing attention to the holy month of ramadan the word play injects a freshness into the iftar.. :) i remember as a student decades back we used it to similar advantage to tease our class fellows. nice liked
sweet poem, i loved this..............................................
seems to be for ramadhaan Is it Iftaar party well done 19
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
thnks fr the cmment and yor poem is good too actually it is a very good poem about the date.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! : }