Amanda Lukas

Rookie (Ft. Lauderdale, FL)

Daydreaming - Poem by Amanda Lukas

A moon shines brightly
as butterflies dance with the wind
and I am nestled up to you
enjoying hand-holding
and sweet smooches
as we watch the stars twinkle.
A comfortable sigh
as the night slowly passes,
so serene
I wish it wouldn't end.
We syncronize our breathing
yet I notice only momentarily
before a playfull hand
reaches in to tickle my side.
We are nothing but smiles,
knowing not a care,
then the night slowly passes
and I wake from my daydream
knowing that you are here only in my heart.


Comments about Daydreaming by Amanda Lukas

  • (4/14/2007 10:50:00 AM)


    This is a beautiful day dream that's not too far out to come true! I hope it DOES come true for you. This is a lovely poem! (Report) Reply

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  • (3/30/2006 1:47:00 PM)


    Daydreams come true Amanda; butterflies will bring you the good news one day
    in a summer daylight.................when you open your eyes you may see the reality.Really a gripping poem and thank you.
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  • (3/28/2006 9:57:00 PM)


    Sweet, and then rueful. I liked the sweet better than the rueful! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, May 14, 2007


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