Dazzling Heart Poem by Nilima Deb

Dazzling Heart

Rating: 4.8


Nervously I felt the overview humor
of your dazzling heart,
was whispering with a soft note on my ear,
'Blue blue open your door I am there'...

I buzzed,
Buzzed into the silence of reminisced twitter.
Am entwined with the classic fragrance of crimson light,
kissed my dreams and hugged them tight.

What a look of mesmerized eyes!
Just was dancing on the screen of embarrassed mind,
I felt the footsteps of your dreamy flies,
Wistfully adorn the path of heavenly rise

It was all dreaming, dreaming of your enlightened write!
touched my soul and illustrated my heart
Like a fairy-tale of overwhelmed imagery
grasped me, grasped me suddenly by its all contemporary.

Wednesday, May 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sriranji Aratisankar 18 May 2016

Like a fairy-tale of overwhelmed imagery grasped me, grasped me suddenly by its all contemporary. Well written Nilima.

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Nilima Deb 28 May 2016

Thank you very much dear poet for your comment.All the best.

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Prabir Gayen 02 February 2019

Beautiful poem......thanks ❤

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Nilima Deb 21 June 2022

thank you dear poet

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 December 2017

touched my soul and illustrated my heart Like a fairy-tale of overwhelmed imagery grasped me, Revisited your poem like this poem remembered me. Your poems can put illusory nets on the hearts of a reader, mesmerize and make it its own. Great skill dear poetess. Please keep writing, don't allow your emotions to spill into the unknown zones of eternal void. Don't mind if I get personal, Regards. Subhas

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Nilima Deb 21 June 2022

thank you for your such kind comments and inspiration

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 December 2016

Nice poem.. I felt the footsteps of your dreamy flies, Wistfully adorn the path of heavenly rise- exquisite imagery..10++

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Swapan Das 22 October 2016

Beautiful, and well described.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 August 2016

A very romantic drop! ! One should not miss sipping potion of love if one gets it. The flow is amazing. Thanks for sharing.

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Nilima Deb 14 August 2016

True observe.Thank you so much dear poet.

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