'Dear' Moon Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

'Dear' Moon

Rating: 5.0


My gaze turns
towards the moon..
Pale blue light,
as I swim through it
Streams of warm,
cotton faces that
drift lazily through
the hot humid air.
and Once again,
i am covered.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 09 December 2009

another nice poem of yours.i like your economy of words. thanks for sharing.

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lisa moore 29 November 2009

i am bewildered about how good your writing is... how do you always manage to make me wonder about your poems? this is brilliant, the pictures i get in my head are astoniching from your poems. lisa xo

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 November 2009

Excellent imagination…and covered in your imagery again to be in next imagery Ten Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to my page with your graceful comments and criticism too welcomed… [Why hack my she &c] niv

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Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

a nice poem...fine imagery!

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) Cool(poem! you have melted my heart.(: ]>+

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James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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