Dearly loved, do you hear me?
Where do you roams?
In the valley cardamom shoots
Mangoes ripes; paddy reaps
Springs giggle and sprints
Mynas, koel and cuckoo
Chirps, sing and whistle
To wake us daily at sunup
Dearly loved, do you hear me?
Where do you hides?
Behind the arches the ruined palace opens
Or in the remains of the palace broken
In the orchard, under an age old tree
I gave you my love on an autumn day
The tree is still highs in my heart
But I don’t know it, there or not
Ruiners left nothing intact
Several left bare hand the born land;
Others killed and buried
Remaining few are slaves
Are you still in the ruin or in captivity?
Or hiding somewhere we roamed around?
Dearly loved, where are you?
Do you hear me? the sobs of my soul?
Very impressive, I liked the first stanza, ur use of words is very amazing here, keep up the good work we w8 more from ur fabulous imaginations :)
Reading it is a memorable experience.............. these feelings usually cannot be expressed by words.. You have Put life into those feelings so effortlessly... great..
Nice poem to read! Simple and easy to read poems no body can ignore!
beautiful...cuts accross ages and rages charming and lovely :) sat
Wonderful poem, nice imaginations, (the trees is still highs in my heart) .. I think the tree of love... well written with beautiful words..
Magnanimous, spectacular and magnificient..shimmering brilliance in zour work is evident in the words...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Interesting words. Great poetry, here. Keep on writing.