a formal word
for life at its end
you come in black
hovering unseen in the dark
snatching ones life
your cuts are deep
though mostly unseen
you come in time
to make your pick
o! taker of life
give me time
to die in time
'give me time to die in time'. what a fantastic poem. I have never tasted such a beautiful peom about death. simple words in a simple way., but the depth of the poem cannot be measured. so nice
this is such a great piece....dude....you killed this one. It is rich with every element of poetry in its finest blend......A hat off for you on this one.
again this is a great poem...u used such average everyday words and yet...u got ur point across so well. To ba able to write such a great poem about such a broad subject shows how much talent u truely have
Your poem seems to have a very in-dept meaning for so few words...i liked the way you personified death...very lovely
beautiful poem! I especially enjoyed the part about cuts unseen! ~Lacey~
Thanks for your comments on my poems. I read your poems and they are unbelievable great. I cant believe it and all. You are a true poet Kareem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
deep... its good though..rlly good! .