When they feel fog before their eyes,
when throat has a strange suffocation,
The truth overpowers all the lies,
Men get from all duties a redemption.
All the hopes are left far behind,
Fear of the arch rival comes to fore,
Nothing works whether it is heart or mind,
Who all the time wishes more and more.
His hunger is never
down or over,
Until he exercises on them his massive power,
But he is utterly coward and never seen,
He steals them from behind and leaves the scene.
Fear of the arch rival comes to fore, Nothing works whether it is heart or mind, .........nice poem with lovely message...10 before you could find cover it has taken you over you had no time left to decide you were on ground and simple tied in few minutes to be consigned to flames not all to be cursed or blamed it has come at the right time and at place you had lost all the opportunities and race f
Coward before death, is the solution final redemtion that he might achieve. If he says he doesn't care not only a coward but a fool. Great write thank you for sharing.10
Everybody is coward with death, only stupid one could say; ' I don't care'. This poem woke up my memory and I was coward too.Thanks for sharing your thoughts through poetry.
The truth will always overcome lies and time will tell. A very poignant and well penned write. Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace...
This is a very well thought out poem about a difficult subject, death. You have described it well with nice texture and imagery. Very nice indeed.10
I think your poem has very strong emotion. it is very well written :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truth does overpower all the lies. Well written. Subtle but strong.