Mohammad Akmal Nazir
Bahraich, U.P. India

A Bee

Rating: 2.7
Hovering around the flowers,
It sucks the juice and converts it
Into honey,
What a loss!
What a profit!
Thursday, April 21, 2011
G. Akanji Olaniyi 22 December 2015
Life is all about give and take! Nature often destroys to create; the balance continues to be conserved!
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Nidhi Dev 10 May 2011
The antithesis perfectly puts forth life's wonderful game... precisely phrased! ! !
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Romeo Della Valle 03 May 2011
A well crafted and poignant write, my dear friend but must capture the real message, life is a two ways street and fortunately I learned the hard and painful ways, like I said in my poem titled: IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, that whenever there is an ending there is also a new beginning and what we think is a great loss, it turns out to be a blessing from the sky and it is time to move on! Love and Peace for always, my brother, my friend! Love and Peace for always! ...
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lost soul 01 May 2011
i can't add much more than the comments of your other readers. nice concise juxtaposition of profit and loss
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Cristina Teodor 30 April 2011
An amazing and clever view of two situations, a lost of the nectar for a flower, and the honey, a benefit for us, the humans. Great ideas in simple deep words..Cristina Teodor
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Juan Olivarez 28 April 2011
When I was a young man, a million years ago, I used to work with honeybees, they are wonderful creatures, and provide a very necessary service and product. Unfortunately here in the states, there is a virus going on that is killing all our honeybees. Wonderful poem Akmal.
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Santosh Sharma 27 April 2011
A beauty and a tragedy in the life of Bee, a creature's efforts, miles of travel in a day one fine morning all honey is with some one else. A beautiful write.
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the bee gets its food and the flower get polengrains, a symbiosis
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bees get food and flowers get pollination. a symbiosis. keen observation. marks 10
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Malaya Roses 24 April 2011
Excessive exploitation shall impair the nature. Use and conserve will give more benefits and every living thing may share the profit. Hope for the win-win situation.
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