*a Humble Complaint* Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

*a Humble Complaint*

Rating: 4.4

You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
As one gets relief from
Scorching heat
By gentle rain,
As the sermon of a saint soothes
The disturbed mind,
Your words could have healed
The wounds of my heart,
For once you touched me, felt me,
And covered your being with my love,
As you said,
You smelt my love and called it red rose,
What's happened now?
Thorns have grown on my lips,
My being has become the grave of your hatred,
Is it a diversion
Or you're posing to be more sensible?

Dickens Joseph Sawo 08 January 2012

this poem reminds me of a saying in my country where your title means the same, i love its simplicity in words.wonderful poem with wise sentences.

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Eva Saldana 10 January 2012

Exellent! ! :) i loved it. 10

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Diamond Williams 10 January 2012


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Moses Olarotimi 29 February 2012

Nice piece of creative intelligence. I envy u. Kip it coming

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Nyagaka Charles 07 January 2014

real life...lovely piece.

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hello 10 October 2018

it is so good but it is so bad

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REZA HUNTER LION 29 September 2018

*******REZA HUNTER LION HERO- - - -Go home in ZERO

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Ishan Dwivedi 15 July 2018

Poem with a great stuff

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Rommel Galicia 22 June 2017

very nice poem indeed👍

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Khanyisile Mtshali 21 November 2016

Beautiful use of words. I can relate to what is meant... thank you for sharing.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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