Arm in arm,
Nearly frozen,
Her heart pulses harm,
Like the night his was stolen,
Blood-red, black beneath
Like the starlight, her loveless blood ran cold,
Cutting into the wrists he used to hold
He held the raft
But she grabbed the anchor,
He saw it was his love, the weight that sank her.
The love they'd never show
Look who's still breathing
But you should also know
He's now the one bleeding
god- that was strong! its so sad- and you said it with such emotion. it was amazingly written. 10/10. you are talented!
this is a brilliant master piece. really dark emotions about love and suicide. i loved it to bits kyle your are one talented individual! ! !
Wow. Nice. It's crazy how things can be turned around huh? I know this feeling, and it sucks huh. Nice work, Keep it up.
Wow this poem is sooo deep and lovely. I'm definately attracted to the darkness of it all. Wonderful poem =) -Aarraa <33
It's deep and catches me off guard. Such strong emotions, it's an AMAZING piece. I loved it.. Keep up the good work. -Trysta
I really love love, , this poem. And i enjoy reading all of your writings. You are so talented and bound to go far my larrrvelly: -) luvs it! !
woooow! beautiful! really, your words are so passionate, and flow together so well!
wow your really good... thats really deep but good and really sad...! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
all i can say is wow