Death Of A Suicidal Lover Poem by Kyle Jones

Death Of A Suicidal Lover

Rating: 5.0


Arm in arm,
Nearly frozen,
Her heart pulses harm,
Like the night his was stolen,
Blood-red, black beneath
Like the starlight, her loveless blood ran cold,
Cutting into the wrists he used to hold

He held the raft
But she grabbed the anchor,
He saw it was his love, the weight that sank her.
The love they'd never show
Look who's still breathing
But you should also know
He's now the one bleeding

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

all i can say is wow

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**aShLeY~NiiChOl<3** 1013 14 August 2009

god- that was strong! its so sad- and you said it with such emotion. it was amazingly written. 10/10. you are talented!

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Saane Pahulu 09 August 2009

this is a brilliant master piece. really dark emotions about love and suicide. i loved it to bits kyle your are one talented individual! ! !

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Always About love 25 June 2009

Wow. Nice. It's crazy how things can be turned around huh? I know this feeling, and it sucks huh. Nice work, Keep it up.

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Aarraa Shaun 20 June 2009

Wow this poem is sooo deep and lovely. I'm definately attracted to the darkness of it all. Wonderful poem =) -Aarraa <33

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It's deep and catches me off guard. Such strong emotions, it's an AMAZING piece. I loved it.. Keep up the good work. -Trysta

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Camelia Boujalais 16 November 2009

I really love love, , this poem. And i enjoy reading all of your writings. You are so talented and bound to go far my larrrvelly: -) luvs it! !

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DEE RAAIN 01 November 2009

WOW so awesome being 18 i know how this feels. :) SO NICE! !

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Ashley LeBlanc 30 October 2009

woooow! beautiful! really, your words are so passionate, and flow together so well!

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Emily Maddison Saffron...x 02 September 2009

wow your really good... thats really deep but good and really sad...! !

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