Deep Down Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Deep Down

Rating: 5.0


As the, old music box, is slowly
wound... And I am lost, , , with in...
The carousel horses, , , going round...
A Tranquility sweeps over, and is Found...
Swept away, back in time... To the feel, of
that, , , mesmerizing sound...To where dreams, once
again dance, and surround... In the memories of
yesterday... Still twirling away, , , Deep down...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2017

A poem having mesmerizing attraction has been nicely presented. Dear Rebecca, may God elevate your poetic thoughts.

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Rebecca Navarre 25 March 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Being So Kind! ! ! ! ! Your Poems Are Ever So Beautifully Inspirational! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 12 January 2018

Thank You! ! ! Sandra, You Are Ever So Beautiful! ! ! ! ! As Your Poetry! ! ! ! ! Comments And Replies! ! ! ! ! Always Such A Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! And Ever So Kind! ! ! ! ! Thank You, Thank You! ! ! ! ! Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! Your Friend :)

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Rebecca Navarre 12 January 2018

Thank You! ! ! Bill, Oh What A Beautiful Thing To Say I am So Glad :) To Hear This! ! ! ! ! Means A Lot! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry, Is So Beautiful To Find Powerfully Touching Heart And Mind! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! And For Your Very Beautiful Comments To My Page! ! ! ! ! :) Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 11 January 2018

Truly lovely and so very evocative of happy, past times. Things that made you happy, even tough they did not rhyme. Love the idea of finding peace and happiness in such simple, tender things. So, your poem is sweet like you with lots of nectar to go around. Thank you for this precious gift.!

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Bill Cantrell 10 January 2018

Wow! You took me back to my childhood...I was looking at the music box of gold, I was a child again for but a moment..the music brought my family back into my world for a precious instant...only a poet could write words that can touch a reader like this! Thank you!

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Susan Williams 24 March 2017

Yes, yes, yes! ! ! You recalled those music boxes perfectly to my mind with their spinning horses or pirouetting ballerinas going round and round to that enchanting tinkling music. Thank you for bringing forth that childhood memory from its dusty corner in my mind.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 25 March 2017

Thank You So Much! ! ! Susan, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Those Tinkling Boxes, Mean So Much To Me....Most The Ones Are From Family, Years Ago, As A Little Girl Who Used To Dance For Her Grandma. Your Poetry Is Filled With Such Wonderful Beauty! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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