Defiant Blue Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury

Defiant Blue

Rating: 4.8


It was completely azure blue in the morning,
With flowery petals of white scattered everywhere,
Then the white petals mischievously covered the blue,
Playing hide-and -seek with rainbow colours.

Stayed in the bed gazing at the mesmerizing wide expanse,
Then to my utter dismay, it turned into grey, with a little shiny spark in the corner.
I can't move, I can't take my eyes off from that enchanting sight,
Can't lose that irresistible morning sky!

The rose plant got charmingly decked overnight,
Tiny green tender leaves appeared at every branch,
The evergreen is gently swaying to the rippling music of the wind, and the maple beside it,
The breeze emanates lemon scent, caressing, cool and calm!

The tantalizing blue is not going to be defeated, and overshadowed,
It's returning with a mystifying luminous smile,
My day is complete with a surreal feeling even though I didn't see the sun!

Friday, May 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

'My day is complete even though I didn't see the sun! ' - The poem wouldn't be complete without this beautiful line! A nice poem! The caption is nice too.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 May 2020

beautiful poem penned//10+ the nature cares the day like a mother with full pleasure and peace speeding inside heart the nature with full effective color dyes the gloomy realm of heart and makes it enjoyable till ending its time

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How beautiful is your poem! " the nature with full effective color dyes the gloomy realm of heart " - superb expression! Thank you, I am honoured.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 May 2020

A well written wonderful poem...10++

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I am so glad to share my poem with you and all other poetry-lovers at PH. Thanks for the lovely comment, and generous rating.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 May 2020

A beautiful poem on the morning scene when the sky looks blue and flowers begin to bloom and dance with the touch of cool wind. 'The blue is not going to be defeated, and overshadowed, It's coming back with a pretty little smile, My day is complete even though I didn't see the sun! '...is so nice. Enjoyed the poem thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.

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I am touched with your lovely comments. So glad that you enjoyed my poem on Spring. Thank you so much.

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