Descending From My Dreams Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Descending From My Dreams

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Descending from my dreams,
You are integrating in the ordinary,
And I, —I have lost the dream...
Was it you, or was it my mind
That created you?
In all your splendour—attaining perfection!

I know, I do not know you: —
Who are you?
Can I meet you again,
To compare you with my vision of you?
The three of us—conversing about Love,
And maybe...even madness...

Monday, June 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 20 January 2018

Can I meet you again, To compare you with my vision of you? The three of us—conversing about Love, And maybe...even madness… So nice verses!

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Susan Williams 30 June 2017

Was it you, or was it my mind That created you? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A question we should ask of ourselves whenever we feel the stirrings of love. Are we really seeing these perfections, these virtues, that we think we see... or are we imputing them because we need to see these things in those we love. Very probing poem. Also loved your word choices. 10+

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Hazel Durham 16 June 2017

I love this poem revealing your inner dreams of a potential lover that he is so perfect, full of splendour that you would love to meet him, as you ask yourself if he is real? If so the image, the reality and you will chat together about love even madness! ! Original, so imaginative and deep, physiological game of your innermost thoughts and dreams colliding into an outstanding write! !

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