Despicable Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Despicable

Rating: 5.0


(Inspired by "If There Is A Right War" Poem by Yonah Jeong)
It is wrongly said
and wrongly quoted,
repeatedly
"All is fair in love and war".
But war itself is unfair,
for it is violence
uncalled for.
Nothing
but Nothing
is fair in war.
War is unjust,
unjustified and
unjustifiable.

War is despicable,
a simple anathema
to humanity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

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Chinedu Dike 24 May 2022

Well articuated and nicely brought forth with deep insight. Facts do not cease to exist because they're being ignored...

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I feel gratified, dear poet, that you have been able to capture the essence of the poem. Thank You.

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M. Asim Nehal 23 May 2022

Very well said, We all should condemn war but how about war of words instead?

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Yes! Dr Nehal. It is my opinion about the futility of war that I have expressed. If anyone has a different take, I am ready for a ‘war of words' it that suits him/her😊

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2022

'Nothing but Nothing is fair in war.'---I agree with you.But when there is an aggressor who comes stomping to occupy your territory, this war for self defense is very much justified.A wonderful poem that expresses concern over futility of war.

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Thank You, Bharati for the detailed notes on the poem.

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You are true, about the aggressor, Bharati. One need to defend the people, the common man, against aggression. And I am fully aware that there are occasions when war becomes imperative to protect/defend their will.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2022

The poet is absolutely right in expressing the undeniable truth! What the poet has expressed at the end goes beyond any shadow of doubt so far as humanity is concerned. A highly expressive poem. Top score!

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It gives me always immense pleasure to read your in-depth and considered observations on my poems. Thank you Dilipji. Much obliged.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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