Diamond Dance. Poem by Fay Slimm
Diamond Dance.
Atop the lake today splayed a dancing
Net of flickering sparkly bright gems, the sun
And breeze playing duet, I stood entranced
As water teemed alive. Light, having fun
With liquid glass, created diamond gleams.
Amid such jiving mass, with frenetic
Performance this dance was supreme, in themed
Revue, with jewel-studded cast. Stars let
Loose brilliant glitter in the fastest fling.
With million winking movements quick silver
Flashed with gold, and for a while the zinging
Air went wild around this speed-display, willed
By cosmic joy. Then breezes died, the sun
Went into hiding, and the dance was done.
Fantastic imagery. you took me to the seaside fay.
Another fan here Fay. Very beautiful. I reckon Gerard Manley Hopkins would have given this one a 10.
Fabulous imagery Fay...makes me feel I was there with you watching this amazing dance....Fi 10++++
Fay...that was just great-you explained how I feel when I dance [15 yrs of comp ballroom dancing] it was just magic nuff said ++++10 regards uavnicescotch
I know I have commented once but I love this poem fay going to add it to my Favorites.
A dazzling display of a diamond dancing with amazing images and scintillating words to create a spectacle of sheer brilliance! 10 Karin Anderson
wow..this is such dazzling and amazing one indeed..I enjoyed it very much....too bad it ended short...thank you so much for this one... best wishes with love shan
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 11:28:34 PM # 1.0.0
dear fay its hard to recognize bounderies of imagination and reality here in this poem, blended greatly +++10