Different Eyes Poem by Manonton Dalan

Different Eyes

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I was practicing my swing precision
to increase my forward power move
i keep on slipping off grass, wet
spikes were of fraction efficiency
when dealing with overgrowth, week
too much elements to consider, clue

i did my thirty minutes drill, sweat
watch hit marks; straighter than most
pick uprooted grass; planted it back
my puppy came and tried to dig it up
and look at me; seem to be wondering
why am i punishing grass for no reason

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Dave Walker 30 July 2013

A great poem, made me smile. Like it.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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