Crimson Love

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Discarded Love - Poem by Crimson Love

Discard this unworthy love,
Throw it in the fire,
Unclench my fists,
I unleash my pain,
Keep in mind, of all the love I've given in vain,

She discarded my love, like it was nothing at all,
She crumbled that poem, that was part of my soul,
She laughed at my try, she Wanted nothing more,
She wanted to watch that of crimson fall,
Trying to grasp a love thats been discarded.

my love is taken, by someone so cruel,
Take my heart its been ruined, by you,
A heart is not needed when I never plan on loving again,
Keep my small and bleeding heart,
its forever yours, even if the love I have given,
was all but discarded.


Comments about Discarded Love by Crimson Love

  • Stefanie Fontker (10/9/2011 3:52:00 PM)

    Who's discarding your love? Tell me and I'll beat 'em up! Haha, just kidding. I love this one, great expression of emotion. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, October 10, 2011


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