It was like finding a treasure
You are a precious gem
You gave me such pleasure
Again and again
Now we cannot keep in touch
We have faded in the haze
But I will never forget how much
I discovered those few days
What a lovely peice, happy and sad at the same time, I: heart: it much, XD
This is a beautifully written poem, Tia, one that tells lovingly of a romantic encounter that was unique in intensity and wonderment and from which a deep personal fulfillment was gained. Like all such marvellous experiences, it was all too brief and the parties have drifted away into their very different lives. Yet tne memory of that enjoyable romance lingers, like a vivid impressionist painting, to be savored again and again in a corner of your memory as the years gently unfold. This is indeed, a very beautiful and deeply touching poem. Carl.
Hi Tia. A few days of pleasure, with someone you treasure, is way-y-y-y beyond measure. A pleasure to read. Regards Dave T. **10**
Very well put, finding, enjoing, losing, then remembering. Pablo Neruda said in his poem 'Saddest Poem' that love is so short and forgetting is so long.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is wonderful Tia, such gentleness shown, yet strong emotion....I really do like your style of writing..... Thanks for this Tia..............Keep expressing my friend Best wishes Jon.