Tia Maria

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Discovering You - Poem by Tia Maria

It was like finding a treasure
You are a precious gem
You gave me such pleasure
Again and again
Now we cannot keep in touch
We have faded in the haze
But I will never forget how much
I discovered those few days

Comments about Discovering You by Tia Maria

  • (3/26/2009 10:26:00 PM)

    This is a beautifully written poem, Tia, one that tells lovingly of a romantic encounter that was unique in intensity and wonderment and from which a deep personal fulfillment was gained. Like all such marvellous experiences, it was all too brief and the parties have drifted away into their very different lives. Yet tne memory of that enjoyable romance lingers, like a vivid impressionist painting, to be savored again and again in a corner of your memory as the years gently unfold.
    This is indeed, a very beautiful and deeply touching poem. Carl.
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  • David Threadgold (9/15/2008 9:02:00 AM)

    Hi Tia. A few days of pleasure, with someone you treasure, is way-y-y-y beyond measure. A pleasure to read. Regards Dave T. **10** (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/9/2008 4:19:00 PM)

    A nice poem of discovering someone. Enchanting. (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2008 12:31:00 PM)

    Very well put, finding, enjoing, losing, then remembering. Pablo Neruda said in his poem 'Saddest Poem' that love is so short and forgetting is so long. (Report) Reply

  • (8/15/2008 7:26:00 AM)

    Heart felt emotions. Beautiful yet a bit sad all in one. (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2008 2:48:00 PM)

    I wonder why your not in touch..... love this work

    regards Tom
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  • (6/28/2008 1:30:00 PM)

    What a lovely peice, happy and sad at the same time, I: heart: it much, XD (Report) Reply

  • (6/28/2008 11:51:00 AM)

    This is wonderful Tia, such gentleness shown, yet strong emotion....I really do like your style of writing.....

    Thanks for this Tia..............Keep expressing my friend

    Best wishes

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 22, 2008

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