Discovery (Revised) Poem by Heather Burns

Discovery (Revised)

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Sitting
under the tree of life
hovering over as a large
canopy

Protecting
from the heat of the day
collecting thoughts

Anticipating
the future cooling
emotions

A future
unclear about to be
discovered but not known.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 31 August 2013

life summarized! ! ! wonderful! ! !

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 31 August 2013

poetically presented..good write

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Dave Walker 31 August 2013

A great poem, some people think the future is already set, I think the future is what we make it. A great poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Wonderful write...Future is full of surprises, always unclear and unknown. Still we anticipate, it will be cool. Yet not sure about it.....Loved reading it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 02 September 2013

A nice poem of concern on the indecisive future.

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Hazel Durham 01 September 2013

The future is always very enticing as we can imagine all sorts of possibilities! Beautiful write

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 September 2013

Sitting and anticipating an unknown future. Beautifully expressed.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 September 2013

Awesome and wonderful nice and wise presentation thank for share and thank to PH

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