Dislocation Poem by ONElia AVElar
Dislocation
I sent you a kiss
via air, alas
The wind was not
In your direction!
It blew it far away
from here
another cheek became
a promised landing pier
Oh dear, we tend to
overestimate the
conductivity of the air.
Sofia,02. June 2008
Had to come back to this one. It's so very clever, multi-layered and delivering many messages the more you read it. HG: -) xx
Beautifully said. The kiss may land anywhere, Its fragrance of love is in the air.
Original and amusing. Kisses that land where they shouldn't...food for thought!
it's so much in the fitness of things...doesn't everything begin with a particular objective and end up as something else...we're all wind-prone!
How wonderful to imagine a kiss sent along the air and landing on some unsuspecting person's cheek! ! ! Bet they were thrilled... Lovely poem Onelia. HG: -) xx
Awonderful mix up of humour and sarcam. Loved it. O dear, you sent a flying kiss, Such kisses many a time miss. LOL! ! ! ! !
Nice poem, a kiss went astray and landed on another cheek. 10 for this.
Wow! How nice is form of the poem; how beautiful is the content of the poem! Really nice job done so far sending a kiss! Enjoyed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 3:23:15 AM # 1.0.0
Overestimate the conductivity of air....true not only for love in every other sense..nice write10