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Beach

Rating: 3.1

Fine, warm sand under the skin;
breeze playing with the long hair;
seagull`s yells and distant babel;
she feels invisible - stretched
on the overcrowded beach;
innocent, bare-back Eve
from the holy Bible.

Friday, March 28, 2008
Hair Poems: 107 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: beach
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sebastine Humaemo 04 February 2009

Ahhh lovely write...short and sweet................10++ sebastine

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Constantinos Grigoriadis 29 January 2009

Few words. Great meaning.. NIce work!

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Akram Awadat 15 January 2009

very beatiful pice keep writing

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Tsira Goge 03 December 2008

onelia, It is very beautiful and thin poems...10.... Best wishes, Tsira

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C. P. Sharma 18 November 2008

Hail to thee blithe spirit! You sing the songs of bare being; The sun, the sea and the breeze, Like seagull, release the body's ring. CP

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A B Faniki 07 October 2019

Well penned and captured image. Great write keep them coming

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Afzal Shauq 29 September 2009

Fine, warm sand under the skin; breeze playing with the long hair; seagull`s yells and distant babel; she feels invisible - stretched on the overcrowded beach; innocent, bare-back Eve from the holy Bible. a great theme inter related to spritual saisfaction and symbolic way way of writing..like this type of poetry..your doing well and most of your poems are well written., .appreciate you

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Indira Renganathan 24 June 2009

A mood of trance...nice poem

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premji premji 15 May 2009

a painting made of words..........

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Janice Windle 23 March 2009

Surely a self-portrait, Onelia - you've captured the primitive feeling of joy, freedom and abandon to sensuality and the warm sun that one feels on a beach holiday... and I expect Adam was glad you were there too!

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