10 moons,
9 months,
with 2 hearts,
pulsing in my body.
You try to teach me now
love, tolerance, compassion...
My Darling, maybe it`s just time
to repeat my most exciting,
10 moons,9 months long,
thorough body-
language
lesson? ...
very good poem this...that is the treasure one woman - well why a woman alone? -a parent cherishes in the early days of marriage...wonderful presentation, ane...10
Shape poetry is so much fun. I enjoyed this one. I’m sure you knew that two moons in one month is called a blue moon. I like your title although I would have titled it Blue Moon. Since I am the mother of twins, I first thought of the two hearts pulsing as, Aha, she has had twins. But no, I was wrong. A wonderful poem. Adeline
I love short poems Yours is exceptionally good.I like the way you present your thoughts 10 and more. And thanks for your comments on mine too
I love this poem Onelia, it is beautiful just because of the extreme feminine angle to it but also so very tender. I had to come back to re-read your wonderful work. The shape of the wording also lends itself to the subject - Bravo! HG: -) xx
This is beautiful writing with great subject....what else should inspire but the miracle of creation and the love that starts it: -) I wrote one on Motherhood too [3
100 % enjoyable Very very well written. Touching, full of feeling Any child would like you as a mother Even the shape of the text looks like a pregnant belly Congrats
brilliant poetry madam.. well this is what motherhood is all about.. and mothers are the idols of love, care, compassion and many more virtues.. God bless you.. regards prashant
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I liked this one for its conceptual brilliance... amazing from my heart I can sing those lines thank you for sharing this wonderful composition 10 moon,9months.... Rema