The outcome of distance
Moments so awkward
Common sense, not common
Wisdom, very wayward
Lovers of the past
Looking fondly backward
When sky seems to flame
Remember me afterward
ATONCE BEAUTIFUL AND PAINFUL...TH INEVITABLE PARTING LOVED IT CHEERS sorry fr the caps...
u let everyone feel that sadness of an unwanted distance. gorgeous piece
I found no words to praise you Nightingale. Word Distance itself weighs your gravity. Nice piece of art of yours. Give more.10+++++
Hello, Beautiful poem, nightingale, you do not see back rose? 10x10.. Tsira
Distance can create awkward moments and affect wisdom. I agree with Meggie and I think the last two lines are stunning. Great poem. 10 love Karin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a lovely write, Amir.. I love most these lines of yours below When sky seems to flame Remember me afterward Take care, Meggie