Distance Makes The Heart Grow Colder Poem by Aqua Flower

Distance Makes The Heart Grow Colder

Rating: 4.5


As distance keeps growing
and the wind keeps blowing
my heart begins to shiver
yearning for your touch
it aches so much
looking for warm words
cooler words go unheard
heart continues to shiver
hoping for my prince to deliver
and the longer I wait
the more I feel you are not my mate
for if you were
you would not deter
from placing your lips on mine
distance makes my heart grow colder
every time

Lion and Tigress series
Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Saturday, March 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Castellenas John 13 March 2019

I agree. Love distance, can be love forgotten. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.

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Aqua Flower 13 March 2019

Hi John thank you for your comments on my poetry! Much appreciated!

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Matthew Holloway 10 March 2019

Loved the title is had me hooked, poem was wonderful thank you

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Aqua Flower 13 March 2019

So glad you love the poem Matthew! It's a little twist to the old saying.

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Susan Williams 09 March 2019

I could not resist the title! ! ! ! Well chosen! ! ! And I think your view of the heart plus distance is more true than distance making the heart fonder. Love can be a fickle thing at times. Love the way you write! 10+++

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Aqua Flower 09 March 2019

So happy the title pulled you in to read this poem and that you like the rest of the it as well. This is my take on long distance lovers. And yes love is very fickle at times. Thank you for your comment, Susan.

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