Dreams Poems: 81 / 500

If I Write You A Poem

Rating: 4.9

If I write you a poem, will your heart melt?
To tell you all the feelings that I felt
while lying in your arms under the covers
no one will ever know that you are my magnificent lover
It is something kept secret in my heart at night
Going to bed with dreams that I hold so tight
dreams that keep me happy throughout my life
and the dream of wanting to be your wife

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Sunday, May 20, 2018
Dreams Poems: 81 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,dreams,longing,wishing
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lodigiana Poetess 20 May 2018

A delightful poem written with love, desire and longing..loved it! +++10

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Aqua Flower 20 May 2018

And I love you name, dear Poetess! So nice of a comment. Thank you! Glad you liked it!

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Rini Shibu 20 May 2018

Beautifully penned love note

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2021

i LIKE IT. I MAY PUT IT IN MY NEXT 'SHOWCASE'. BRI ;)

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Aqua Flower 02 August 2020

Thank you @ Stephanie. The site will not let me reply to your comment.

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Stephanie T Castillo 01 August 2020

I love your poetry! It is simplified with a song from your feelings.

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Jane Campion 21 July 2019

Your poem is a comfort to those who love and write poems. Thank you for your lovely comments.

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Aqua Flower 24 September 2019

Thank you Jane. I think most people who are on the site would agree that it is each of us that Inspire one another. I'm glad you like the poem.

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Bill Cantrell 25 May 2019

My heart melted when reading your lovely poem, for a flower to give it’s scent is to pen her heart...just a wonderful moment, I do love the essence of your poetry..with your words I feel your touch...and that is a special place in poetry

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Aqua Flower 25 May 2019

When you reply to my poeme, your comments are always heartwarming. I believe this is one of my older poems that I wrote. Being in love certainly can bring out words that we didn't even know we had. So happy to hear from you and thank you for your comment.

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