If I write you a poem, will your heart melt?
To tell you all the feelings that I felt
while lying in your arms under the covers
no one will ever know that you are my magnificent lover
It is something kept secret in my heart at night
Going to bed with dreams that I hold so tight
dreams that keep me happy throughout my life
and the dream of wanting to be your wife
copyright @ Aqua Flower
A beautiful poem of love. Very heartwarming. Enjoyed reading it.
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I love your poetry! It is simplified with a song from your feelings.
Your poem is a comfort to those who love and write poems. Thank you for your lovely comments.
Thank you Jane. I think most people who are on the site would agree that it is each of us that Inspire one another. I'm glad you like the poem.
My heart melted when reading your lovely poem, for a flower to give it’s scent is to pen her heart...just a wonderful moment, I do love the essence of your poetry..with your words I feel your touch...and that is a special place in poetry
When you reply to my poeme, your comments are always heartwarming. I believe this is one of my older poems that I wrote. Being in love certainly can bring out words that we didn't even know we had. So happy to hear from you and thank you for your comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A delightful poem written with love, desire and longing..loved it! +++10
And I love you name, dear Poetess! So nice of a comment. Thank you! Glad you liked it!