Farah Ilyas

Rookie - 16 Points (10 12 1987 / Faisalabad, Pakistan)

Divergence - Poem by Farah Ilyas

Which one day my divergence will tenacitied? ? ?
Being chased by grim belief & nostalgia of sting

With luminous eyes & notion in mind, , , , , ,
He is asking and am being asked.

Will sacrament of society will kept on spoiling our life?
Is it feasible?

We enlighten our life with the divine supremacy of love
Admit each other as we are….

Farah Ilyas.

Comments about Divergence by Farah Ilyas

  • Sallam Yassin (6/28/2013 3:00:00 PM)

    great message of love
    As Allah created For love not for hate
    we enlightened with your divine message thanks
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  • Jahan Zeb (6/10/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    Very strong language. The theme is grand and the message is conveyed in a nice flow. It's helping. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (5/11/2013 12:31:00 PM)

    Divine supremacy of love makes us to conquer over sacrament of society....a beautiful theme! (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Muzzammil (6/10/2012 3:27:00 AM)

    Nice poem having pretty lines and it also has fine imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (6/10/2012 3:13:00 AM)

    Wonderful and strong projection in few lines, that's really cool and it really a strong poem! keep it up and thanks for inviting! ! :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Alex Medina (6/9/2012 8:15:00 PM)

    Very deep. So deep I'm still digging! (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (6/9/2012 4:37:00 PM)

    This is fantastic Farah! I love it. it is deep and love always prevails. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Raja Nosherwan (6/9/2012 2:24:00 PM)

    A strong and prosperous poem, you have strong emotions. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/8/2012 5:21:00 PM)

    Admit each other as we are,
    A beautiful ending to this poem
    Thoughtful and strong
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  • (6/8/2012 1:47:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading this poem, great write (Report) Reply

  • Oludipe Oyin Samuel (6/8/2012 1:41:00 PM)

    Whoooa. You're an enjoyable poet. I love your syntax, they're of authority. Really nice. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (5/19/2012 6:38:00 PM)

    good write, i enjoyed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 20, 2012

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