Do I Dare? Poem by David Taylor

This is very good David! I wonder what your decision will be... Good luck... Hugs Dee

David, this is a hard kind of poem to write....seriously making a decision. I think the rhymes in your first three lines distract from the poem. Just try it without the rhyme and see whether you like it better. (Even the first two lines are fine...it's just that third rhyme that jars.) Just a suggestiion. Raynette

This speaks to my heart very clearly - and it seems as if you liked participles as much as I do... Kat.

the art of asking for something fom the almighty is to be modest. you got it david.

David, sometimes the best questions we can pose to ourselves are rhetorical in nature. Then life, or chance, or change, or whatever, presents us with the answers... I find this masterful. t x

David, I liked the unanswered question at the end Do I Dare? David

Hi Puzzling Poem! Something vague