Do I Deserve It Poem by Little Sunshine

I enjoyed. Short and to the point. The flow was a little off, but still excellent.

I love your poem 'do I derseve it' I think you try to bring out what we sometime feel inside when situation changes regarding some kind of relationship. thank.

Awwww, that is so sweet, the way you express yourself. Honey, I want to tell you something, you sure don't deserve it. Your heart doesn't deserve to get stepped on. Don't be lonely, I'm sending my love. XXXXXXX

Take the time dear friend and change the focus of the camera, this poem is so full of emotion. Seems to me, you should be asking if they deserve YOU. The lovers are often alone, and the loved often take them for granted. Excellent write. Be Well, Nate

A nice emotional composition. Love it.10 for it.

u deserve better! truly passionate write here.. u amazing!

oh it is sad poem but in general it is beautiful well-done and god work. take it easy girl, of course u don't deserve it.. keep smiling. smiling is good, your poems are sad why...

Nice sad poem. Keep on writing.

A very sad poem but done very well.

very sad and simple, but beautifully writen. great job.