Do I Live In Your Heart Or You Live In Mine? Poem by Jahan Zeb

Do I Live In Your Heart Or You Live In Mine?

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Do I live in your heart or you live in mine?
I don’t know I just don’t know
From far off places I feel I hear
Warmth of breath, your eyes’ shine

You come, when I sleep, take me with you,
From the land of all to the land of none
Valley of my dreams, island of your thoughts
Hands in hands, we walk together through

I need not to travel, or walk or fly
To be with you, to see you smile
No distance too long, no fence too strong
I then find you, and we fly high

Immortal the tie we on moon nine
I live in your heart you live in mine.

Jahanzeb 02/11/2013

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 December 2013

Such a fab poetic sentimental poem. On cloud nine, wow to say moon nine, innovative idea! Dont forget to review my latest pleez.

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Heather Wilkins 18 November 2013

do I live in your heart or you in mine. an interesting question you live in each other. lovely thoughts

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Payal Parande 14 November 2013

Prayer is not asking. It is a longing of the soul. It is daily admission of one's weakness. It is better in prayer to have a heart without words than words without a heart. sometimes i feel like i'm surrounded by magicians..cause your words are magic sir..standing ovation to you

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Kanav Justa 13 November 2013

Immortal the tie we on moon nine I live in your heart you live in mine, , , loved these lines, , , , , ,

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Unwritten Soul 02 November 2013

The title remind one of my earliest poem called- In your heart my love reside- The romantic sounds fill the air sir, ! _SOul

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Malakand Pakistan
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