Once I asked: ' Do you love me? '
You repeated the same to me.
There is no answer,
Your silence proves I'm your lover.
Do you love me?
It's a big question to me.
You answer me indirectly,
I need it directly.
Do you love me?
It's a conundrum to me.
You are crying my death-call,
Oh dear! you give me your all.
Do you love me? I ask last,
You give me answer fast.
woww Sanjib such a lovely poem why do you insist that she tell you the answer perhaps she has her own reasons whatever, you have asked your question and await the answer time will tell -10 anjali
very goooood! ! ! you can express your feelings perfectly well. But I wonder what the answer was :)
I remember Lorca's verse- 'Amparo! how difficult to tell you, I love you! ' 10+
a, , ok, , i guess you had the answer from her...i can't give mine...lolz
well this is such a dramatic poem.. It is very much like a scene from a movie.. I can imagine this situation.. a very exciting poem.. 10 cheers shan
an excellent lyric poem, very well writen, lovely to read.............10+++++
lovely poem of love and its eternal question, 'do you love me'short and sweet.best wishes, ritty
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deeply written....many people don't know what to say when asked...very nice :) Keep it up! (Y)