Dogs And Horses Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Dogs And Horses

Rating: 5.0


Like a stalking horse, she was making moves,
The night was gorgeous and the party was cool.

In a big hall, small groups were distinguishable,
Like minded stuck together closely as indictable.

The hosts were running like the ghost to meet invitees,
Some eyes were searching for breeze and cheese.

People were moving from one group to another,
And wives were keeping an eye on the dogs with feathers.

He left quietly the place looking so strange,
All horses were trolling and the dogs were alert.

Monday, June 14, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: satire of social classes,paradox,philosophical
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The modern day party where husband are with wife just for show off (Like stalking horses) and the wife remains alert like dogs keeping an eye on them.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 14 June 2021

Hahaha sir right under the nose of the wife. This could be dangerous.

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Kostas Lagos 14 June 2021

Nice one! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 June 2021

I do understand this satyrical poem, and for the gift of humor 5 Stars Full, Mr.Asim Sir! I have enjoyed enormously this fantastic poem.

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Poetic Sky 16 June 2021

Interesting poem.

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Indira Renganathan 15 June 2021

A real life event gifted with fun .... much interesting...5*****

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 June 2021

Both faithful animals but misused and abused by humans. The party scene is satirical and intriguing. LOL 5*

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 June 2021

I think it's a nice one too. Bravo!

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