shakil ahmed

Gold Star - 16,516 Points (31-01-1969 / Badarpur, Assam, India.)

Don’t Go With That Boy - Poem by shakil ahmed

Don’t Go with that Boy

Don’t go with that boy
Ignoring my heart-felt love
That was born before the
Moments beginning in heaven’s above.
I warn you thousand times
Don’t run after a mirage
I am the fountain of love
Come, come to my cottage.
You will be caught in a snare
Planted in a dark land
It is I who can save you
From the clasp of evil hand.
You are a coloured butterfly
Sitting in the blade of grass
I cast an amorous glance,
Very silently when I pass.

Don’t go with that boy
He will make you cold
Oh, my love,
Please be alert and bold.
Love resides within my heart
Has a deep penetrating force
Come, come very near my heart
You will get ocean of love, of course.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Don’t Go With That Boy by shakil ahmed

  • Alufa Oke Joshua (12/20/2015 9:56:00 AM)

    nice buildup of words, indeed your heart is where love dwell. (Report) Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/6/2015 8:05:00 AM)

    a nice poem i liked the way u projected (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/3/2015 6:40:00 AM)

    Mirage! ! But with hope; all in the name of love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2015 3:32:00 PM)

    If this is meant for a girl you care about, I suggest you present it to her. It is beautiful and very convincing. I don't see how she could ignore it. And the best of wishes to you. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2015 10:54:00 AM)

    I cast an amorous glance,
    Very silently when I pass.

    beautifully caught up, cheers!
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2015 9:36:00 AM)

    And love is like that with so many do's and don'ts (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 2, 2015

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