Don’t Go With That Boy Poem by shakil ahmed

Don’t Go With That Boy

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Don’t Go with that Boy

Don’t go with that boy
Ignoring my heart-felt love
That was born before the
Moments beginning in heaven’s above.
I warn you thousand times
Don’t run after a mirage
I am the fountain of love
Come, come to my cottage.
You will be caught in a snare
Planted in a dark land
It is I who can save you
From the clasp of evil hand.
You are a coloured butterfly
Sitting in the blade of grass
I cast an amorous glance,
Very silently when I pass.

Don’t go with that boy
He will make you cold
Oh, my love,
Please be alert and bold.
Love resides within my heart
Has a deep penetrating force
Come, come very near my heart
You will get ocean of love, of course.

Wednesday, December 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 02 December 2015

And love is like that with so many do's and don'ts

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Alufa Oke Joshua 20 December 2015

nice buildup of words, indeed your heart is where love dwell.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 December 2015

a nice poem i liked the way u projected

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2015

Mirage! ! But with hope; all in the name of love. Nice work.

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Lorraine Colon 02 December 2015

If this is meant for a girl you care about, I suggest you present it to her. It is beautiful and very convincing. I don't see how she could ignore it. And the best of wishes to you.

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Neran Sati 02 December 2015

I cast an amorous glance, Very silently when I pass. beautifully caught up, cheers!

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shakil ahmed

shakil ahmed

Badarpur, Assam, India.
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