Don't say good bye.
For when you do I will surely cry.
The tears will flow down my face,
as you leave our secret place.
Don't leave me behind.
You were always so kind.
Please don't walk out that door.
If you do I won't see you anymore.
When you do decide to leave me.
Remember this is the place where I will be.
Don't tell me when you're gone,
for if you do everything will be wrong.
Whatever you do, don't leave.
Please oh please don't leave.
My heart would break for you.
I will miss you!
Please don't say good bye.
Never say good bye.
well written crystal, very touching and in a very simple way you have brought out the emotions. Wish you Good Luck.. :)
============================= secret pace or place? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Don't tell me when you're gone, for if you do everything will be wrong.”………………………………………………………………………………………………… ….. how can a dead person tell you anything? these lines sound a bit awkward to me, but I understand at least. gone/wrong ……..this is a good effort at making a rhyme, but sometimes I would rather have a poet not try to make a rhyme IF the words which make up the resulting rhyme do not convey this is ok. Whatever you do, don't leave. Please oh please don't leave. My heart would break for you. I will miss you! Please don't say good bye. Never say good bye.” I sometimes don’t like when a word is repeated at the ends of different lines e.g. leave/leave you/you good bye/ good bye …………………but I think it IS APPROPRIATE HERE. nice. bri :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good by always leaves one in a position of distress. Hold on.