Down The Rabbit Hole Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Down The Rabbit Hole

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R-ight down the rabbit hole,
Y-ou feel the pain and sorrow;
A-s you're in tough situation,
N-ot knowing if there's still tomorrow.

F-ighting hard down the rabbit hole,
L-ike in a bizarre state of life;
O-n guard against the devil's threat,
R-eady to endure war and strife.
E-arly thirteenth of February, open your heart, spirit, and soul;
S-tay strong, firm, and brave down the rabbit hole.

Down The Rabbit Hole
Friday, February 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2018

A wonderful acrostic write that drives one to be strong despite.adversities in life. A great piece.

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Upendra Upm 16 February 2018

It is difficult to know if it is your detractors or your most valued well wishers who make you feel for any of your slips, that it is the end of everything till the next dawn when you realise that you are alive and kicking.Excellent poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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