Dreaming About You Poem by Alisha C

Dreaming About You

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Sitting lonesome beside the ocean
No, I am not dreaming about you
I wonder the motion of waves
May know huge or a few
I am not dreaming about you
Do I really care about the things you've done
Make me starve by all mean
I am lonely among the entire world
Still don't find things new
I am not dreaming about you
May be you have gone very far
May be not but my thoughts are
Still wonder what I use to see
In front of mirror your glimpse on me, that view
I wonder if I am dreaming about you
No, I am not dreaming about you
No, actually I am from a long time
This ocean full of life, this day full of light
This air full of wave carrying all my love to you
Yes I am really dreaming about you

Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love and dreams,nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 05 March 2016

Fighting inside to understand what is going on..but yes finally we have to surrender the truth...at the end.. Alisha, this is a heartfelt short poetry :) well done

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Alisha Castle 05 March 2016

Thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 February 2016

No, actually I am from a long time This ocean full of life, this day full of light This air full of wave carrying all my love to you Yes I am really dreaming about you.. very very nice poem. full of love and desire and romance and passion. thank you dear poetess.

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Manonton Dalan 23 February 2016

hehehehe very nice poem

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Ernest Makuakua 24 February 2016

actually I am from a long time This ocean full of life, this day full of light This air full of wave carrying all my love to you Yes I am really dreaming about you beautiful poem my friend i love it

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Terry Craddock 08 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Water Viewed As An Infinitesimal Surface An Oceanic Mirror' inspired by the poem 'Dreaming About You' by the poet Alisha Castle and dedicated to Alisha Castle.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 14 November 2017

Sometimes dreaming becomes an addiction and you need to start expressing your dreams! ! !

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Terry Craddock 12 January 2017

'Sitting lonesome beside the ocean' has so many possibility startling views, the line 'In front of mirror your glimpse on me, that view' also holds the emotive response of countless mood moment possibilities, dreams are endless, all dreams daydreaming feature immediacy in worlds easy to create in our imagination minds, the land of endless possibilities, loved this

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James Mclain 27 November 2016

You do, you care about the sea and what it does to you.. iip

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Partha Pratim Goswami 15 August 2016

Tragedy mixed romantic thoughts coming to mind really affect deep in the heart.Nice poem

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