Dreams Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury

Dreams

Rating: 5.0


If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny;

If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth;

There are pebbles, there are petals,

Covered with dreams,

So soft, almost like an angel

Touching them,

Caring them.

Let them be where they are -

Unharmed,

Because dreams are not to be shattered!

Sunday, January 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,hope,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 March 2018

Let them be where they are - Untouched, Because dreams are not to be shattered! Yes, things untouched remain purer and fresh. A lovely theme well dealt with. A poem that renders sweet fragrance of your heart so well. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++++

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Thanks so much for your comments of appreciation. It is lovely to share with other poets! Thanks for the rating too.

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Yiyan Han 25 January 2018

Welcome to PH Yes, we'll keep dreaming :)

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 25 January 2018

Thank you. My first poem on PH - hope to connect with people who dream!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2018

An elegant piece of poetry! Sweet expression! My favorite lines are opening two lines: If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny/ If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth...Thanks for sharing! You may like to read my poem 'An Ode to My Conscience'..Thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 December 2022

If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth.....true.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2022

A wonderful poem dear poetess... thanks for sharing

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 August 2022

A fascinating poem... so lucid poetic expression. I love this beautiful poem dear poetess.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2022

An excellent poem....loved it dear poetess. Top score! !

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Savita Tyagi 23 October 2019

Beautiful poem. Journey of river is not smooth still sweet dreams are a solace.

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