If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny;
If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth;
There are pebbles, there are petals,
Covered with dreams,
So soft, almost like an angel
Touching them,
Caring them.
Let them be where they are -
Unharmed,
Because dreams are not to be shattered!
Thank you. My first poem on PH - hope to connect with people who dream!
An elegant piece of poetry! Sweet expression! My favorite lines are opening two lines: If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny/ If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth...Thanks for sharing! You may like to read my poem 'An Ode to My Conscience'..Thank you
If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth.....true.
A fascinating poem... so lucid poetic expression. I love this beautiful poem dear poetess.
Beautiful poem. Journey of river is not smooth still sweet dreams are a solace.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Let them be where they are - Untouched, Because dreams are not to be shattered! Yes, things untouched remain purer and fresh. A lovely theme well dealt with. A poem that renders sweet fragrance of your heart so well. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++++
Thanks so much for your comments of appreciation. It is lovely to share with other poets! Thanks for the rating too.